Monday, 25 April 2011

red kite, no 25

wing tips, poised fingers,
hesitating, drifting, stretching
for piano keys


Greyscale Territory said...

Such a wonderful, surprise last line! Delightful haiku!

LauraX said...

I like this...I can feel the combination of desire and hesitation.

Anonymous said...

A beautiful metaphore.Thank you.

Ophelia said...

beautifully in the moment.